Battle of the Lamb

March 13, 2012
By Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)


Born of a virgin’s womb,
Pure amongst this fallen world’s kin.
The last hope of all sinning hearts,
The joy of angels from heaven above.
He fought the Devil,
Long and hard,
He fought him from the first.
All crimes He took,
Onto His holy self.
Upon a wooden post the Lamb fell,
To the dark pits of flame He was taken.
The Devil thought he’d won;
The Devil laughed in his prison.
Though before he knew it,
The Lamb had turned and gone.
For sinner He was not,
Like the corrupt beings He’d left.
The Lamb was resurrected,
In a stone tomb where His body lay in death.
The price for the sins,
Of the fallen world’s kin were paid.
Heaven opened its gate to the fallen world again.
Will they receive the given gift?
Or rot in in a fiery pit?
It’s for them to choose.
Their salvation was the victory,
For which was fought the battle of the Lamb.


The author's comments:
The crusifiction and return; I wanted so badly to create a religious poem and this is what i wrote, though it was Jesus who gave me the ability! Praise the Lord!!

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on May. 22 2013 at 12:58 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thanks, I really worked on the last part because I wanted to get the ending right, its good to hear it turned out well! =D

on May. 22 2013 at 12:56 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thankyou, and good luck libertyman!!

on May. 21 2013 at 4:17 pm
MickLiberty GOLD, Troy, Michigan
15 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A hero can be anyone. Even a man doing something as simple and reassuring as putting a coat around a young boy's shoulders to let him know that the world hadn't ended."
Bruce Wayne/Batman, The Dark Knight Rises

This is a wonderful poem! I've been wanting to make a Christian poem, but did not know how to start. You have inspired me, thank you!

on May. 20 2013 at 6:39 pm
Clarabelle SILVER, Caracas, Other
6 articles 0 photos 21 comments
I love the poem, especially the ending - it added more depth to Jesus's death

on Sep. 14 2012 at 11:34 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

thank you!!!!

Lizzy31 SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2012 at 8:05 am
Lizzy31 SILVER, Lkow, Other
8 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything that is beautiful is not always good but everything that is good is always beautiful

i loved it . you write so good , its great.

on Jul. 7 2012 at 9:16 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I love this! So amazigly describes the crusifixion and the love of Christ. I think God gave you a gift, and it's so great to meet some fellow Christians out there. Love you guys :)))))

on Jun. 15 2012 at 4:21 pm
Poetic_Person GOLD, Shippensburg, Pennsylvania
18 articles 8 photos 40 comments
This is really great! I am also a Christian, and  love to write poems about God! I intend to read more of your work! 

on Jun. 8 2012 at 8:34 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thx, and no I just really wanted to write this one day so I did. I lov Jesus!

on Jun. 6 2012 at 10:47 am
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 92 comments
I had never thought of writing a religious post. I really enjoyed this. Question for you... Was this written near Easter? I always feel really religious and peaceful near Easter... :)

on Jun. 2 2012 at 12:06 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thx about your input, and sure-I'll check out your work! =:D

on Jun. 1 2012 at 6:49 pm
iCheeto PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 61 comments
I loved this poem.  Your passion and respect for what you believe in shines through and is so strong, and the imagery is awesome.  I love the voice, it's an excellent piece all together.  Would you mind reading some of my stuff and telling me what you think?  Id really apprecuate it :)

on Apr. 11 2012 at 10:00 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

i am a Christ follower, and if u find the right inspiration it's easier to right.

illusions GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2012 at 9:00 am
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
10 articles 0 photos 150 comments
Great job! I have never been able to write a religious poam. May I ask what religion you are? You don't have to tell me if I'm being intrusive.




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