The Bullet

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You shot into my heart
You broke it apart
It cannot be fixed
I’m bleeding
Red blood like a red rose
Pouring out of me
Like water rushing from a waterfall

I feel cold like Antarctica
My body is becoming stiff
I cannot move
It’s like I’m in a straightjacket

I cannot feel anything
Like my whole body is numb
When will all this end?
My eyes are going black
Like the night sky

Am I dying?
Am I already dead?

I cannot speak
My mouth will not move
My voice
It’s gone
I cannot talk

I see a bright light
I know I am dead

The bullet
Shot through my heart
And killed me





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cuddlemunsterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2013 at 10:28 pm
(: thank you
 
Kenzico This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 2:00 pm
Heyy. this is sad but heartfelt. I hope you will find someone else to inspire you to write a happier poem!
 
GittaR said...
Aug. 22, 2012 at 3:49 am
Do I like this? No....I looove it!!
 
blue_bunny_femaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 4:43 am
thank you soo much
 
Hannabug said...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 2:46 pm
This is really good !!!!
 
blue_bunny_femaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 4:44 am
thank you sooo much girl
 
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