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You see, I see

March 5, 2012
By tiszbe_melbiish BRONZE, Fabens, Texas
tiszbe_melbiish BRONZE, Fabens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Nver try to be what people want to see, take off that mask and show them who you want to be"-Me


You see fat when you look at her
You see weirdness when you glance at her
You see strange hair when you stare at her
You see oddly dressed when you focus on her
You hear a strange voice when she talks
You hear her stutter when she speaks
You call her ugly at her very sight

You and all the other says she is weird, odd, fat, and ugly. You say why cant she loose weight. You ask why cant she be like the rest of us. When you look at her you see weakness, a follower, a loser.

Yet when I look at myself:

Instead of seeing fat I see a thick madame
Instead of seeing weirdness I see unique
Instead of seeing strange hair I see creativeness
Instead of seeing oddly dressed I see my own fashion.
Instead of hearing a strange voice and stuttering voice I hear a STRONG VOICE.
Instead of seeing ugliness...I see Beauty.

I say im a thick, unique, creativeness, fashionable, strong madame. I don't like to be like everyone else because I am my own soul. While I look at myself I see a STRONG person. While I look at myself I see a person who was born to lead. When I look at MYSELF I do not see a loser... when I look at MYSELF...I see a winner

By: Melissa Martinez
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The author's comments:
Growing up I was bullied constantly everyday from my first day to school til my last day of 8th grade. Never in my life did I ever feel beautiful til recently. I guess you could say this poem was my breakthrough showing everyone who once called me ugly that I don't care what you think beacuse I am beautiful.

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on Mar. 19 2012 at 5:49 pm
ChristopherMenton BRONZE, Blythewood, South Carolina
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Live each day to the fullest.

Wow this is really deep; i'm very impressed.