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The Simple Things

March 4, 2012
By Austin_9k SILVER, Westminster, Maryland
Austin_9k SILVER, Westminster, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
A man's interest in a single bluebird is worth more than a complete but dry list of the fauna and flora of a town.
~Thoreau~


She strokes her hair then

brushes it back.

Lifts it up, then lets it fall.

Slowly, she pulls it to

a pre bun form,

then lets it slither threw

her finger tips.

Finally, her hands drop.

Such a fidgiting manerism.

What inspires it?

i’d like to imagine

that she spends hours on it.

Cleaning and conditioning

within that early morning

routine.

Though it could be more

transcendental.

She might just enjoy the

soft, smooth touch that god

weaved upon her.

I do believe she is not

aware of what she does.

Or what she does to me.

It is as involuntary

as the faintest heart beat.

Regardless, it is beautiful,

simply because, she looks happy.

The author's comments:
Girls in the world dont need to slut themselves up or put out to get guys to like them. The small, innocent, simple things are what really cause attraction.

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on May. 8 2012 at 7:19 pm
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, I don't care which, just don't try and change me.

I love it! I like your diction choices. It really conveys how you feel about her. Great job. :)

DanielM. said...
on May. 5 2012 at 10:52 pm
Awesome job.!! Your message is so true. Great Job!! you're a good poet.