Trail of Blood N’ Tears

March 3, 2012
By shane,fenchly BRONZE, Arvada, Colorado
shane,fenchly BRONZE, Arvada, Colorado
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My Heart bursts through my chest,
Following your ever smaller silhouette,
Falling down the stars,
Into a world of only,
You,
Me,
A trail of blood n’ tears,
It’s all I have,
to follow,
to find my love sick heart,
lost in a world,
You,
Me,
lost to your eyes,
My heart has run away,
A trail of blood n’ tears,
All I have to follow,
All that’s left of,
You,
Me,


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on Mar. 8 2012 at 11:42 am
Shnitzal-Face SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you fail to prepare... prepare to fail

Very nice poem, dramatic, and heartfelt. Try more vivid descriptions, you want to paint a picture with a poem, but this one is great!


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