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I Hear You: Paris

February 24, 2012
By Anonymous

I hear my name carried on the wind
Dripping with sorrow
With misery
Paris...Paris
I hear it in my mind
In the echoes of my thoughts
The softest words ever spoken
Hearbreaking
Tear causing
Paris....Paris
I see it written in the stars
I see it floating in the clouds
Paris....Paris
Where are you
I miss you
Oh I love you so
I'm sorry I doubted you
I'm so sorry
Then I heard
I heard again
Paris....Paris
I love you
I hear you
I hear you
Paris....Paris
Longing
Loving
Waiting
I'm waiting
Oh Paris....Paris
I hear you
Paris...Paris
Wait....
I'm coming



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Paris1997 GOLD said...
on May. 9 2012 at 9:09 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thanks. I figure that if the subject is important, the words aren't as important as the feeling.

dend90 SILVER said...
on May. 9 2012 at 9:06 pm
dend90 SILVER, Irmo, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
we are going to relentlessly chase perfection, knowing full well we will not catch it, because nothing is perfect. But we are going to relentlessly chase it, because in the process we will catch excellence. I am not interested in just being good

This is very good. I love that you don't actually say what it's about. It let's the reader interpret it for themself

on Mar. 2 2012 at 6:01 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

oh very interesting! I've been through the long distance thing as well. Actually, if you have time, check out my story "Goodbye". Love endures through separation at times:)

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:58 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Oh! & Thank you very much. :) 

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:57 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

It's about two people who are in love. They are separated by time and distance and when he leaves, the girl doubts that he loves her. Yet she keeps hearing him call her and realizes that she will always love him and he will always love her.

on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:23 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

I love how it's mysterious! What do you want it to mean? Never stop writing:)

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 3:46 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thank you. :) No.. my nickname is Paris.

on Mar. 2 2012 at 2:32 pm
screenname55555555, D, Alabama
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This is really cool. You have a nice style to your writing. Are you from Paris?