I Hear You: Paris

February 24, 2012
By , Lakeside, CA
I hear my name carried on the wind
Dripping with sorrow
With misery
I hear it in my mind
In the echoes of my thoughts
The softest words ever spoken
Tear causing
I see it written in the stars
I see it floating in the clouds
Where are you
I miss you
Oh I love you so
I'm sorry I doubted you
I'm so sorry
Then I heard
I heard again
I love you
I hear you
I hear you
I'm waiting
Oh Paris....Paris
I hear you
I'm coming

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dend90 said...
May 9, 2012 at 9:06 pm
This is very good. I love that you don't actually say what it's about. It let's the reader interpret it for themself
Paris1997 replied...
May 9, 2012 at 9:09 pm
Thanks. I figure that if the subject is important, the words aren't as important as the feeling.
AbigailElizabeth said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 6:01 pm
oh very interesting! I've been through the long distance thing as well. Actually, if you have time, check out my story "Goodbye". Love endures through separation at times:)
AbigailElizabeth said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:23 pm
I love how it's mysterious! What do you want it to mean? Never stop writing:)
Paris1997 replied...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:57 pm
It's about two people who are in love. They are separated by time and distance and when he leaves, the girl doubts that he loves her. Yet she keeps hearing him call her and realizes that she will always love him and he will always love her.
Paris1997 replied...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:58 pm
Oh! & Thank you very much. :) 
Allia822 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 2:32 pm
This is really cool. You have a nice style to your writing. Are you from Paris?
Paris1997 replied...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 3:46 pm
Thank you. :) No.. my nickname is Paris.
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