Two Halves

February 26, 2012
By cargille5 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
cargille5 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
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Some call it ‘Affection’.
Some call it ‘Chemistry’.
Perhaps they even will say
“That’s Love.”
But we could list words all day,
And not a single one could truly capture
The pure and beautiful emotion you evoke in me.
Every feeling of mine is magnified with you.
You tend to my flame of joy
Until it burns with absolute bliss.
A waterfall of tears bursts from behind a dam
Of pent up emotion that I have held for so long.
These feelings that I’ve kept locked inside
May now come out and experience the world;
A place where they may find others like them.
My delight to your glee.
My grief to your sorrow.
They are two halves to one whole.
When we put them together,
Only then do we learn what it means
To be truly

The author's comments:
An attempt at explaining what love feels like.

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on Mar. 1 2012 at 11:31 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

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on Feb. 29 2012 at 7:47 am
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

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on Feb. 28 2012 at 11:31 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

This is really cute (: I love it! Your words flow really well. Keep writing! 5/5.

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