Lonely

Lonely is the road I travel,
When I have no where to go.
Two feet alone, stumbling along the gravel,
Wishing someone would save me, my hero.
It’s the time I spend on my own,
That makes me appreciate the power of two.
But when four footprints are shown,
I think of me and you.





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writerxoxo said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 3:37 pm
short sweet and to the point. it was cute and even had a little bit of sadness to it. but i love the rhyming and the flow, awesome job :)
 
Jfry12 said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 2:13 am
I really liked it! I especially liked the parting image of the four footprints. The only thing that didn't work was the "two feet alone". Since there are two, they can't really be alone. Would you mind checking out some of my work?
 
Let-Love-In replied...
Feb. 27, 2012 at 4:05 pm
thank you! i would love to, as long as you keep giving me feedback :) its nice to hear what others think, whether its good or bad. 
 
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