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The day I die,
I will awake.
By his side,
Standing at the pearly gates.
My days full of peace,
My soul no longer sad.
Light as a feather ,
Free as a bird ,
The darknesss never to touch me.
Only light fills my days .
The day I die,
Will be the day
I finally live.




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hotshot said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 3:31 pm:
I remember when you first showed me this one. I loved it then and I still love it noe :) great work tay
 
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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 11:41 am:
"The day I die,I will awake." Thumbs Up, Best part, I really love this poem Tbug, I think it's better than your book, to me it is, Excellence love it !
 
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IceSkater913 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:34 am:
i love the ending!!
 
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Wonderment said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:28 am:
I love it. I like the images and stuff. Nice.
 
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HiddenAngelInTheDarkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 6:04 pm:
This is beautiful Silent :) amazing job
 
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