Catch Raindrops

January 22, 2012
By Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost


Rain, rain

Never go away

I want you here

So I can run outside

To play

And splash

In the puddles

Till the dirt muddles

Our miniature lakes

And Look up to heaven

And catch raindrops



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on Dec. 27 2012 at 9:41 am
GuardianoftheStars GOLD, Shongaloo, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Let's tell young people the best books are yet to be written; the best painting, the best government, the best of everything is yet to be done by them."
-John Erslcine

I like how you used the familiar 'rain rain go away' and changed it up! Very creative and nice ^_^

on Mar. 16 2012 at 7:19 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

simple, elegant, innocent, lovely.

I really like this, although it's not my style. But don't take that as me saying i don't like it, because i do, it's just most of the stuff i write is sad and morbid, because poetry is a release for me.

What i'm trying to say is that even though i would never write this, and it's not my style, i like it.


on Feb. 17 2012 at 3:10 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

It's simple..yet elegant and full of truth. LoVe It!1!

on Feb. 17 2012 at 1:45 pm
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
16 articles 16 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

Whoo rain! Rain is amazing, especially thunderstorms. Anyways, I love how you modeled this off the old classic ("Rain, Rain Go Away") and then put your own twist on it.

on Feb. 16 2012 at 3:33 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
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I agree, it's very cute!

on Feb. 13 2012 at 5:42 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

thank you!

on Feb. 12 2012 at 3:03 pm
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes SILVER, Sunnyvale, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together."

Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another,
"What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C. S. Lewis

Woot! A poem about wanting the rain to continue! FINALLY! :D I hate songs about rain having to go away. anyways, the poem is cute, light, and has a sense of innocence to it. I like it. :D


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