Inside The Mirror

January 27, 2012
I reach out,
Holding all our emptiness,
We are nothing.


Seduction burned,
Is that all that's left to say?
...All that you reveal?

Darkness grazes her skin,
Tempting her face to turn,
Stare into his cold, shimmering eyes,



What she thought would be...
Screaming for freedom,
Still addicted to the poison,
Of Hurt.

Why must she burn?
Inside The Mirror,
She remembers....

Only lies.

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Ginga-Ninga said...
Feb. 9, 2013 at 10:03 pm
.....speechless..... O.O <is in awe atm!
Blue4indigo said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 5:22 pm
This is amazing work; I love your wording, the line breaks, the flow...everything.
recurring_resilience said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:38 am
The thoughts that fly through our minds as we stare into the mirror.. Wonderful imagery. Couldn't help but think of the girl and boy standing in a sort of dark haze.. "Darkness grazes her skin" really set the tone for me
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:34 am
(: this one's amazing too <3 NEVER STOP WRITING OKAY?? 
SilverSun said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:26 pm
Super awaesome! i love the use of large spacing. its very a interesting format. I totally get wat ur writing about.
torilutz8 said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 6:31 pm
I like it, and the spaces add emphasis and dramatic effect :)
M.Vaughn said...
Feb. 18, 2012 at 5:48 pm
I really like this I think your idea for writing was great. People always have two personalities and it takes a while for them to find themselves. good work
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 1:24 pm
Thank you so much^^ I feel so appreciated and awesome now!
-Kal- said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 3:59 pm
It seems kinda... disjointed to me. I don't know, maybe that is just me being ADD. But that doesn't mean this is a bad piece, I just like some of your others more :) Keep on writing :)
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 4:06 pm
Yeah lol maybe it is you being ADD lol! Glitter Rain is better I think(:
SuperFloree said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 3:59 pm
Holy. Cow. That is amazing! (^o^)
thefamoustapper said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 3:35 pm
me = crying. This is unbelievably beautiful work, and i know every single one of us had felt this way before, just really connected with me. Keep Writing :)
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:37 pm
Beautiful work written
EthanCalhoun said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:06 am
Still addicted to the poison, Of Hurt. Agony. Desire... this part captured me... i really like the poem 5/5
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:07 am
Thank you so much!^^
recurring_resilience said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:36 pm
I like this poem.. Reminds me of what someone would be like after a one night stand. Well done. I still don't like the spaces inbetween though..
Blue4indigo said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 6:54 pm
I really like this one too, as always, the line breaks and the .... help make your unique voice
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:02 pm
Thanks so much!^^
AllenStovall said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:20 pm
pretty awesome coolio
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