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When I'm Not Loving You

I'm sitting in this chair
With an unfocused stare
An indifferent face
I'm not up for this chase
The taste of joy evades me
Because happiness is never free

I gasp, struggle for air

But my lungs don't seem to care
To give me the life I'm fighting for
And breathing isn't so easy anymore

With nothing to give me reason
And love is so out of season

When my heart is sore
Life can be such a bore
And fun is harder to do
When I'm not loving you





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SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 7:43 am
Wow, this is so true! I love this! I think alot of people feel this way. Great job, I know I always feel this way. Keep up the amazing work!
 
PoetryAngel14 said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 5:07 pm
So, so true. Great job. :) definitely deserves a 5
 
LilZo11 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 6:10 pm
thank you it helps to know what people think
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:36 am
I have to agree with that LilZo11!:)
 
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