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I Miss You

Me and you were practically family,
I wish you could have stayed,
It must be hard letting us go,
We all cried for you,
I cried the most, I have shed all my tears for you,
I miss you, I miss you,
I wish you were here,
right by my side
like you always were,
you kept me out of trouble,
I owe you one for that,
That is why I made this song,
I'll sing it to you, now and all ways
I miss you, I miss you
I miss you (lots and lots)
Yes, I miss you (miss you)
Yeah I miss you (miss you)




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Winged.Living.Free. said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 5:41 pm:
Great job Honor! Loved this tons! :D I'm sorry though. . .
 
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i.hope.you.dance said...
Feb. 27, 2012 at 4:37 pm:
:) very lovely. it's nice and simple- beautiful!
 
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SkyyeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 2:03 pm:
I like it a lot, it's a little short to be a song, so maybe take out or rewrite the parts that make it more song-like and make it a poem?
 
1234sleepThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 11:21 am :
I can see how short it is, but I understand her pain.
 
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