Your Mirror

You drove me to this mental
You drove me to this heartbreak
You took me to this crazy
You took me to this dark phase
You put me through denial
You put me in this dark place
You brought me to this mirror
And all I see is your face





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Josika.Nav said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 1:45 am
hey! i really like this piece. you captured my attention with the rhyme scheme. there is a certain depth in it that is so simply stated. great work (yet again) and keep writing :)
 
Camii said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 9:25 pm
i really liked it! i also like how it end (:
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:12 am
Wow I'm not usually into short poems like this, but you've caught my attention with it!(: I love it! 5/5
 
exoticchipmunk said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Short but deep... i love it :)
 
Silver2black said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 12:27 pm
Heyy I really love this piece,I get it and admire the end honestly 5/5 !
 
Lashonti said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 2:21 pm
I really like this. =)
 
iamthebest said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 6:14 am
Pretty nice poem. I absolutely loved the last two lines.
 
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