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Dreamless

January 13, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Pictures play behind my eyes,
Eyes so weary...
Tugging me away...
Deeper...
A calming, gentle voice whispers words of beauty,
Peace...
...is it yours?
And I'm lost,
Drifting through violet air...
But what am I searching for?

A single, softly brushed kiss upon my lips,
And I know it's you...
But why are you hiding?
Waiting for me,
Somewhere inside my dreams...

Until I meet you there.~

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Dreams(:

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:47 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Beautiful. Just simply beautiful (:

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:17 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you so much (:

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:08 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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love this peice and i love the way you write and get across your idea. im not sure theres just something about it that makes me wanna read it again awesome job! you have a true talent dont stop writing

on Feb. 29 2012 at 2:38 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you! ^^ I'm not sure what makes it so unique, but I'm glad that it isn't the same stuff(: Glad that you enjoyed it!!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:22 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you! (: Youre talented too!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:20 am
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
30 articles 0 photos 36 comments
ok i was wrong, this might be one of my favorites of yours, your very talented and i really like reading your poetry

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:41 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much!(:

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:39 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Written I think this is one of my favorite ones so far... AMAZING

on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:34 pm
Benjamin444 BRONZE, Lenexa, Kansas
2 articles 38 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You will never be what you were meant to be if you're not having fun"- In Wal-Mart, on some product.

Wow. You have a very unique way of writing poems. i like it. It sure has a lot of feeling to it!!!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:05 am
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

Aww I love this =) its so beautiful 5/5 stars!

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:41 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 29 comments
This is so beautiful as all of ur poems are :)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 5:11 pm
cut-out-ur-eyes SILVER, Mechicsvil, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
See the animal in his cage that you built. Are you sure what side you're on? What if everything around you, Isn't quite as it seems? What if all the world you think you know, Is an elaborate dream? -Nine Inch Nails

second stanza is my favorite ^_^ LLLLLOOOOOVVVVEEEE it!

on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:01 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

Oh, and sorry it took me so long to comment...i was a little busier yesterday than i had expected to be o.O

on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:00 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

I really really like this one of yours! Nice job! =) 5/5

on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:23 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

the line about the soft brushed kiss reminds me of your other poem. I really like this though. 5/5 :D

on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:10 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks! I think now that was the affect I was going for! (:

on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:08 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

I really like this one, too! I really love the dreamy, uncertain tone. It's like a beautiful dream...but then you wake up, and the magic is gone...

on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:41 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

I never remember the good dreams.

on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:28 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

I remember all of my dreams...

on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:23 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

It's just one of those things that always seems to happen..


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