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His body moving swiftly
to the dance of life,
he grabs my hand and pulls me in
making me a part.
I feel the rush of his skin
as he dances so swiftly.
I feel confused and get lost
in his tornado of truth.
I see everything: his past
and his present
and accept him for who he is.
Who he is, is not what he has done
and our love is stronger
than that held with chains.
Passion.
That's what flows between us
as we dance this dance
of love and hope.
A dream.
As I awaken, I realize
that is all it was.





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XCBVIA said...
Sept. 13, 2013 at 9:10 pm
I'ma die reading your poetry!!! It's is so beautiful and awesome and rich in words and raw in emotion and lol i'm getting carried away and you probably don't want to hear all that. Hopefully by now you know who i used to be and if you don't i left tons of other comments a)because your stuff is awesome and b) to let you know I'm back and ready to chat with you for a while. We need to find a time and day to chat on here... LOL
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:02 pm
This is my favorite so far... Reminds me of the guy I like right now and all of his personal struggles... Beautiful5/5
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:13 am
Aww. That's great. I'm glad you can relate. I LOVE it when my readers can relate :D
 
Ella1 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 12:11 pm
Wow that is amazing. It's funny how dreams can try and make sense of our reality. Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea and telling me what you think? Thank you
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 3:04 pm
Sure I'd love to! Thanks by the way and I'm glad you make sense of the way dreams affect reality and vice versa.
 
DereBere This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:57 am
I really like this poem! its sweet
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:06 am
Thank You so much :D
 
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