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Red Clay Sky MAG

January 12, 2012
By AFish BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
AFish BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
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The red clay glistens and the sun shines on it as it sets
The trails empty as the hikers settle for the chilling night
the magpies chirp and squawk alerting
others that night is close
The ripples in the sky show that the wind is turning into a gust
rushing through the trees and powering over the canyons
Chirp, chirp, chirp … Squawk, squawk, squawk



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on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:30 pm
Kingdom_of_the_Forgotten GOLD, Ogden, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Time, the cradle of hope.... Wisdom walks before it, opportunity with it, and repentance behind it: he that has made it his friend will have little to fear from his enemies, but he that has made it his enemy will have little to hope from his friends." ~Charles Caleb Colton

I will. Will you read a couple of mine?

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:52 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Sorry, the comment below was meant for Sophie Rose C. I apologize! =( BTW, your work is great! =)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:50 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

I will... if you will see my works "Writer's Block" and "Cute Stranger"! =)

on Jan. 14 2012 at 7:39 am
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

This is a beautiful poem. I can feel as though I'm in the forest with all the hikers, watching for a beautiful sunrise to paint its self on the horizon line. Great job!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 5:37 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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oh I do like this very much - especially the 4th line from the top, where you talk about the ripples in the sky. soft and subtle, and the imagery is good. could you look at some of my stuff, maybe? A particular poem called "Happy Sea" and one which is pending approval, called "Fruits of Moontime"