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January 11, 2012
By Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3


One day
she found
her talent
in the world
Forgetting the past
and the pain
and focused in writing
the poems
and stories
that made up her life
She found her own way
to express who she was
in our little world
The writing just flowed
like a river...
a river flowing down
the side of a waterfall
going down
going down
down
down....
and always moving forward
towards her major goal
to bring hope
and bring light
to the eyes
of the youth...
to bring peace to this world
to make sure
that the others
don't make
the decisions she did...
and now she will walk
with the fine pen in hand
and computer at side
typing and writing
at the speed of light
making the keys dance
and swirling the ink
into words that can be read
by the eyes
of those youths
&lt;3


The author's comments:
look at Timeline, its based off of my talent as a writer.. but i dont think its my best... :D

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Saika PLATINUM said...
on May. 8 2012 at 9:54 am
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3

Thanks, and i am also noticing the rhyme being off, but that really isnt my strong point

on Jan. 12 2012 at 3:36 pm
beautifyyourname SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy." - Anne Frank

Of course! :) I hope I can read your other things as well.

Saika PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 3:35 pm
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3

oh! well thank you for looking, this is one of my least faveorites of my newer poetry

on Jan. 12 2012 at 3:32 pm
beautifyyourname SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy." - Anne Frank

I found it in the "Most Recent" column of Free Verse Poetry!

Saika PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 3:30 pm
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3

how did you find it?

on Jan. 12 2012 at 3:26 pm
beautifyyourname SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy." - Anne Frank

I skipped over this poem at first, but then came back to it because the first line intrigued me. I thought it was well-written and rang true for many writers. At some parts I thought the rhythm was iffy, but that's just my opinion. :) Lovely!