What was the point

January 11, 2012
By Anonymous

He was everything to me
My reason to be happy
For the past four months

But not anymore

He would say he loved me
That I was beautiful
Someone he would love forever

But not anymore

All I saw was a knight
Someone who I would trust
Someone I thought could be the one

But not anymore

I've always had bad relationships
Falling for the guy so easily
So why did I think that would change

I gave my everything
Only to end with a broken heart
So what was the point

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This article has 5 comments.

Newsiesfreak said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 12:54 pm
Thanks for the comment. I can't believe how many saw this and I will read som of yours

on Jan. 12 2012 at 9:41 am
poet.lover PLATINUM, Pineville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Never part without loving words to think of during your absence. It may be that you will not meet again in this life."

i love this! it really shows the search for love and how hurtful yet beautiful and worth it it can be. please, look at some of my poetry:)

on Jan. 11 2012 at 6:00 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

I Agree it's so sweet but so sad

on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:55 pm
Gabazyzen BRONZE, Bronx, New York
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget what hurt you in the past, But never forget what it taught you."

hopefully this heart break will cause you to put your guard up, stay strong !

on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:54 pm
chantel15 BRONZE, Newyork,bronx, New York
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
this was a great poem , i could relate to this 1OO% ,it sucks loving someone and them not loving you back . i like how you expressed yourself and your feelings. but great poem


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