Alone

January 6, 2012
By Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.


I can tell you
But you wont understand
I could cry
And you'll ask for an explanation
I'll explain
And you wont ses
Why the tears drop like they do
You say you understand
Do you really?
Do you really?
I'm starting to realize
That life
People
They dont care abour your tears
They dont care about your feelings at all
Or maybe its just
My feelings that dont matter
My tears
They dont understand
Maybe its just me
They dont give a damn about
It's ME alone in the world
Me,
Noone cares about
Me,
Noone understands.



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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:18 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Really good! Don't think you are alone because I understand this poem and I am sure many others do, too! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?

on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:25 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Love it I agree that you can make I longer and perhaps more descriptive but 5/5

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 8:01 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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i really LIKE this by the sound of the stanzas you could make a longer version of it too!

on Jan. 26 2012 at 3:06 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
we both have a poem titled "Alone" but your's is really good! :)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:33 pm
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
30 articles 0 photos 36 comments
i really enjoyed the poem, a few of mine are like this, im sure yu wud enjoy

on Jan. 20 2012 at 4:29 pm
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
22 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
L.Why is everyone O. trying to find it? V. Maybe it's hidden for a reason...E.

If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see, you might find out first hand what its like to be me...

amazing poem, im adding it to my favorites :D

Mani2x SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 3:02 pm
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.

Thank you. it's nice 2 see I'm not thee only one

on Jan. 17 2012 at 2:57 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
I really love this poem.I understand :).Cause Ive been there.

Mani2x SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:28 am
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.

Thank you.

on Jan. 11 2012 at 3:03 pm
SiMpLyUniQUe BRONZE, Port Of Spain, Other
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
you look at me with your eyes wide closed

i loved it!!!!!!!!! it's filled with emotion


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