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I can tell you
But you wont understand
I could cry
And you'll ask for an explanation
I'll explain
And you wont ses
Why the tears drop like they do
You say you understand
Do you really?
Do you really?
I'm starting to realize
That life
People
They dont care abour your tears
They dont care about your feelings at all
Or maybe its just
My feelings that dont matter
My tears
They dont understand
Maybe its just me
They dont give a damn about
It's ME alone in the world
Me,
Noone cares about
Me,
Noone understands.



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Shmelmo said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:18 am:
Really good! Don't think you are alone because I understand this poem and I am sure many others do, too! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?
 
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WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 4:25 pm:
Love it I agree that you can make I longer and perhaps more descriptive but 5/5
 
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White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:01 pm:
i really LIKE this by the sound of the stanzas you could make a longer version of it too!
 
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Choosing2Live4Christ said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 3:06 pm:
we both have a poem titled "Alone" but your's is really good! :)
 
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EthanCalhoun said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 5:33 pm:
i really enjoyed the poem, a few of mine are like this, im sure yu wud enjoy
 
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XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 4:29 pm:
amazing poem, im adding it to my favorites :D
 
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song-writer26This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 2:57 pm:
I really love this poem.I understand :).Cause Ive been there.
 
Lashonti replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 3:02 pm :
Thank you. it's nice 2 see I'm not thee only one
 
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ThePretender said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 3:03 pm:
i loved it!!!!!!!!! it's filled with emotion
 
Lashonti replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 9:28 am :
Thank you.
 
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