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Dipped into troubles, miseries and pain,
To think of it, regrettable, and all in vain!
Having remained unworldly,
And mistaken to be resilient and doughty.
Would’ve wished, it all to be reversed,
For, all the time, it was darkness emerged.

The state, before, was innocent, fierce or feeble?
How did they get it all so miserable?
Who was to be blamed?
Who was to be made to feel ashamed?
Only too late to realize it was no game,
Failing to think what it badly became.

The innocent ones led to woes,
What would have become of them?
Their providence turned out unlucky,
But just to hold strong and sturdy
And be positive in not giving up!
For all the bitter experiences to be refreshed,
Forget all the sadness and be restrained,
Leave the tragedy and live with the lessons!



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WolfofRoses said...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 2:28 pm:
Wow Muzee. This sounds a lot like my life. Fantastic writing and Theank you.
 
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Sabee said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 2:58 am:
interesting...i still dont know how u bring out the words like this...very nice
 
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White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 8:55 pm:
good poem!!!
 
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cookiestar said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 3:45 am:
This is unique and beautiful. This is relatable. Good job :).
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 6:35 am :
Thank u COOkie...... I really wanted to share a poem like this!
 
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beachgal123 said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 7:36 am:
THis is really good i know what it feels like:)
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 2:21 am :
Yah. Recently, some of them shared their bitter experiences wit me . . And dats when i felt how terrible it is!
 
beachgal123 replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 10:34 am :
ohh I'm sorry:(
 
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tonite said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:11 am:
its..........different and in a good way and dont woeey i like different!!!!!
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 11:19 am :
;-). . . Tnx for a different comment! Well, I wrote ths one 4 those who hav shared their sorrows wit me!
 
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