Mother

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Build me up, tear me down
I can't live with you around
Life of lies and hateful hearts
This is where my journey starts

Broken mirrors, fragile glass
Piercing pieces of the past
All I know has fallen through
And for this, thanks is due to you

So many fears I'm forced to face
And memories I can't erase
Forever, your love I will seek
A promise that you'll never keep

And for this I shall always weep
Not on the surface, but down deep
I'll weep, and weep, and weep,
And weep.





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alicecullen said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 2:00 pm
this is a poem i an actually relate to. i really felt it. lol but anyway..amazing poem :)
 
browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:39 pm
Thanks alice! I wasn't sure anyone would relate but i was hoping that SOMEONE would... :)
 
alicecullen replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 10:00 pm
no problem, anytime...and i know exactly what you mean in this poem..
 
browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 7:07 pm
well then my condolences to you dear. :/
 
babyrex4 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 6:05 pm
This is beautiful! Keep writing poems, you have great sense with words!
 
browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:38 pm
Thank you so much! This was actually one of my first that I was serious about....
 
Acastillo said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 5:17 pm
I really liked this and how it rhymed. Though I cannot say I can relate to this, I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the fantastic work! :)
 
browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 8:05 pm
Thanks Acastillo!! This was my first poem I ever truly felt I could be somewhat proud of.
 
famousthetapper said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 5:12 pm
Ha! I have a poem called Mother too, but your is WAY better than mine. I love it! I feel this way all the time! You're not alone hun!
 
browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 8:07 pm
I'm sorry that i named my poem the same as yours...I didn't know. I'm glad you like it but even more so am i glad tha you understand. :)
 
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