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Pain*

December 29, 2011
By SuiicideQueen BRONZE, West Wendover, Nevada
SuiicideQueen BRONZE, West Wendover, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. - Edgar Allan Poe


Have you ever wanted to scream?
Scream until your lungs stopped
Have you ever wanted to cry?
Cry until your eyes burned

Have you ever lied in bed awake?
Just thinking of the ways you could die
Have you ever faked a smile?
Just so no one will ask

Have you ever stared in the mirror?
And just wanted to hit it until the glass broke
Have you ever stayed up late?
Wishing that the pain would go away

Do you ever wonder?
Wonder what went wrong
Do you ever ask?
Ask why it all happened

Has anyone ever asked you?
If you were okay
Have you ever answered I’m fine?
And just walked away knowing you weren’t okay


The author's comments:
I was thinking about all the pain I was feeling so I decided to write it done I new I couldn’t be the only one who felt that way I new other people could relate to my poem

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on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:30 am
BellaChance PLATINUM, Steinenbronn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Even the smallest person can chance the course of the future. -J.R.R. Tolkien

really relatable. almost exactly what i'm feeling these past few weeks... love it

on Jan. 3 2012 at 10:07 am
BlondeAndProud PLATINUM, Corseaux, Other
29 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. ~Sylvia Plath

yes :D really great flow, you managed to make this haunting and rythmic... I love it :P

on Jan. 2 2012 at 9:21 pm
soccer-girl13, Rock Island, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
-The vision of a champion is bent over, drenched in sweat, at the point of exhaustion, when nobody else is lookinking *Mia Hamm

I can really relate to this. verything you wrote about I have gone through to. Any way you protrade being in pain very well. Great job