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How did we get caught in this mix.
Of people throwing away their lives for a fix.
Of homicide and suicide.
Of dropouts and bad routes.
Of polluted earth and girls giving birth.
Of STDs, stolen keys.
Of dark gray skies and countless drive-bys.
Of fallen hope and have to cope.
When will it finally end? When will the world
begin … to mend?

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Fullyalive15 said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 8:28 pm:
Very nice, your really got your point across without over-doing it. 
 
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RockGirl182This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 22, 2010 at 11:09 am:
I really liked this, nothing to say but keep it up !! :) 
 
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KrystalTThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 2:15 pm:
I really like it. I think that the picture you chose to put with it really brings out a very strong feeling of wanting all of the bad things to go away, and letting the magic reign again.
 
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Dessometrics said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 10:04 am:
i love this its amazing
 
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DiceBaby said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 12:51 am:
livin in the type of neighborhood i live in u have no idea how much this poem has just touched my heart. i truely wish everyone asked the same question
 
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JustBeingME said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:36 pm:
This describes exactly how I feel about the world and how we need to change it... love love love it :)
 
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Lollipop said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 4:50 pm:
wow, this poem is really good!!
 
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Cheyenne D. said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 5:20 am:
That poem touched my heart ina million different ways.
 
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italinbaby11 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 11:32 pm:
i luv it and i can relate to everything but mostly the pregnant thing it was just exilirating and its like when u listen to that poem it seems like it will never mend back
 
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deepest thoughts said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 10:54 pm:
All i can say is WOW! This poem explained exactly what i was feeling. It really grabs the readers attention while asking why hasnt anyone offered a solution to the daily tragidies that occur everyday on this painfilled earth.
 
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peacenow17 said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 10:39 pm:
This poem is amazing. You totally hit the nail on the head. Our world is in a really sucky place right now and we are the generation that can change it.
 
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strain118 said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 10:32 pm:
this is really a thought provoking poem. You obviously put a lot of feeling into this poem!
 
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RachelCrowe said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 8:02 pm:
This is amazing!!
 
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yellow4ever said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 7:37 pm:
i love it! its amazingg
 
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Lotz.Of.sMileS said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 6:59 pm:
even though its not that long of a poem it points out all the big wrongs in our world. that question is one that all of us are all thinking about on a daily basis!! i need you to keep writing!! awesome!!
if you can, can you try to write a comment on my poems? i luv critism cuz u never grow if you never get feedback!!!
 
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xXkittygrrxX said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 6:48 pm:
WOW thats is so true yeah u really summed it up
 
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meredith P. said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 1:30 am:
AMAZING!!!!!THAT SUMS IT UP!!!
 
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CSJ said...
Mar. 25, 2009 at 3:56 pm:
I agree
 
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Lauren A. said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 1:55 pm:
Absolutely true.
 
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SaveThEmpty said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 2:51 am:
this is a perfect description of the world today..and i love it!
 
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ls00 said...
Jan. 11, 2009 at 3:09 am:
i really hope you know that this is very good. i liked it a lot.
 
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JustDance said...
Jan. 3, 2009 at 3:02 am:
this is an amazing poem good job :)
 
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SniiCKers said...
Dec. 22, 2008 at 11:05 pm:
This poem is very true...keep writing u rock..=]
 
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mvpla15 said...
Nov. 23, 2008 at 2:48 pm:
i luv ur poem its so true about alot of things. if people really knew what was going on with the rong of the world i'd say ur poem says it all. u should send it into the plain dealer
 
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sarahh said...
Nov. 19, 2008 at 9:35 pm:
this is amazing. its a cuople simple words that simply define the world as it is. nice work. :)
 
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Smilez said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 1:51 am:
WOWWW.....that is straight up the truth! like no joke!!!actually i kinda reminds me of indianapolis! thats where i'm from and it is all about what you wear and how you wear it! i think this poem should be seen by others b/c its the truth
 
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BriAN said...
Nov. 13, 2008 at 6:49 pm:
This peom really hit home wth me, because I came from a run down city where if you were wearing the wrong color you got shot and if you were a girl you were expeted to dropout and have a kid. I think, given time, the World could mend it's hurt.
 
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Bladefella said...
Nov. 11, 2008 at 11:16 pm:
It sure describes the world as it is
 
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kebswims13 said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 11:01 pm:
very clever and very good rhyme sheme...i like it.
 
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shaybabe said...
Nov. 8, 2008 at 3:02 am:
i love this poem its real and it true and it should be herd by many :0) nice work
 
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OddEmily said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 5:45 am:
seriously. this was an amazing poem. and its so true. big props to you Chelsea.
 
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SilentTears said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 1:32 am:
This is the basic ponderings of a teenager, as we begin to awaken to the harshness that resides within our world. And I think it a brilliant way to depict our feelings. The poem itself isn't obscure, however the meaning is there and as deep as any hidden messages. Great job!
 
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eminem said...
Oct. 1, 2008 at 8:37 pm:
good story
 
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hollister13 said...
Oct. 1, 2008 at 4:35 pm:
wow that is really deep u r an amazing writer
 
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JessicaJinx said...
Sept. 25, 2008 at 2:59 pm:
Wow, your poem was absolutely amazing. I wish I could write as well as you do.
 
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sunshine123 said...
Sept. 21, 2008 at 4:48 pm:
oh my goodness, you are an amazing poet. your poem really caught my eye. i liked it alot, and it is so true. keep up the good work. great job!
 
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DreamWarrior said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 1:59 am:
Very well spoken! The author expresses what is going on in today's world and love the message it brings. Job Well Done!
 
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Guyana09 said...
Sept. 11, 2008 at 6:20 pm:
I LIKE WHAT THE AUTHOR IS SAYING IN THE POEM WHITH WHAT IS GOING ON THESE DAYS SHE IS SPEAKING THE TRUTH... SHE GIVES YOU A SENSE OF REALITY FROM A TEEN'S POINT OF VIEW
 
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add said...
Sept. 7, 2008 at 8:35 pm:
This is amazing
 
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