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Geisha Girl

December 1, 2011
By YukiBella SILVER, Tampa, Florida
YukiBella SILVER, Tampa, Florida
9 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can see the sky while staring at the ground. \"-Corey Wittborn


Slowly, she walks.

Geisha girl.

Her lover gone.

He left her behind.

Now all she has is her box of memories.

Geisha girl.

Where has he gone, she asks herself.

She doesn't know he's left her, for another.

Another lover.

Geisha girl.

Oh, dear lover, she cries.

Oh where have you gone.

She stands at the waters edge.

And there, she will stay forever.

Geisha girl.

Always holding that box of memories.

Waiting, forever, for her lover.

Geisha girl.


The author's comments:
I was writing a story and this just popped into my head.

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on Dec. 26 2011 at 9:41 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Great idea, and pretty good wording, though if you made the lines a little longer, and used more imagery to paint a more vivid picture in my head, I would have been in absolute love with it. :) No hard feelings, haha, I still gave you 5/5. And you can feel free to write anything and everything you want about my work. ;) Pretty good job! -Lilac