Geisha Girl

December 1, 2011
Slowly, she walks.

Geisha girl.

Her lover gone.

He left her behind.

Now all she has is her box of memories.

Geisha girl.

Where has he gone, she asks herself.

She doesn't know he's left her, for another.

Another lover.

Geisha girl.

Oh, dear lover, she cries.

Oh where have you gone.

She stands at the waters edge.

And there, she will stay forever.

Geisha girl.

Always holding that box of memories.

Waiting, forever, for her lover.

Geisha girl.

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Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 9:41 pm
Great idea, and pretty good wording, though if you made the lines a little longer, and used more imagery to paint a more vivid picture in my head, I would have been in absolute love with it. :) No hard feelings, haha, I still gave you 5/5. And you can feel free to write anything and everything you want about my work. ;) Pretty good job! -Lilac
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