Hold On Forever

December 23, 2011
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When you told me

i prayed for you

When i heard you say the words you said and the sadness in your eyes

I knew as your friend i had to help and hold on to you

Don't give up because of your mistake

Don't be sad because of what people might says

because i will hold on to you forever

Don't give in to the responsibility of what your gonna

because i am here

Don't slip away

Because i will hold you here and i won't let you slip

I am here and will hold on to you Forever

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Blue4indigo said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 3:41 pm
Incredibly sweet, and it flows beautifully! Your friend is very lucky to have your friendship :)
Blue4indigo replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 3:43 pm
a couple of little errors...nothing a short proofreading wouldn't fix
Naman said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 8:08 am
I liked it :)
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 8:22 pm
lovely poem and from the heart! just a few spelling errors "says" should be "say" and "your" "you're". i can tell you really love your friend and that makes an amazing poem
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