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I fall down to my knees
My breath in haste I get cut and I bleed
Into the earth my blood I share reflect my face so I stare
Down at my eyes in a daze so I press my body in the ground and I lay
I reminisce about my past days and think of what to say
To my family that don’t see
My eyes as they cry and my mouth that feed them lies
Telling them its alright
That tears are of joy
That they have brought to my world
But I hide behind walls
That I build to get away
From their face
Of disappointment in their eyes
And those unsaid words that split us apart
So I leave
With bleeding feet




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Tough_Heart2This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 1:12 pm:

amazing

 

 
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cheetoz45680 said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 11:46 pm:
it's rly deep and i love it. rly emotional and rly relatable
 
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Anamika This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 6:50 am:
it's really good. i could picturise what you were trying to say very easily, almost like im feeling the emotions myself...keep it up!
 
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Turbocharger said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 3:48 pm:
Wow.... just... wow.
 
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Wonderment said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 9:14 am:
Wow. Thats really emoutional. I can see your emoutions coming through. This is good stuff.
 
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