Long Sigh

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All I need is a good cry,
A long sigh,
A reason why.
Then I can find
some peace of mind.
The strength to stand.
The strength to smile.
Please take my hand,
And help this child.
Your child.





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yazigirl said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 4:55 pm
its really good! dont we all need a long sigh...
 
BroadwayBaby said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 5:17 pm
I really liked this poem! However, you lost me a bit at the end. Your child? I'm not sure who you're audience is anymore, but I love the random rhyming.
 
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 5:19 pm
Sorry i should've clarified that on the side. "Your child" is referring to "God's child". thanks for the comment!
 
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