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Pain is a gray cloud

December 15, 2011
By TheColourFred17 BRONZE, Vineland, New Jersey
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A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.

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Pain is a gray cloud
waiting to cry
an overwhelmed flood
that heartbreaks the sky.
something so dark has crept up on me
a vanquishing shadow is coming to get me.
the thunder in the rain
strikes my pain
the clouds clear up
and my feelings feel insane.

© Jessica P., Bethel Park, PA

The author's comments:
Everyone has one of those days where they just feel like they can't ever get back up. Well thats not true. We all have something to live for.
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