Pessimistic Sun

December 14, 2011
By Anonymous

The sun looks down at all the children having fun but sun cares for none. For the sun is a pessimistic one.

The sun may not have clothing but it has depression and anger to wear. To the sun nothings fair but the sun doesn’t care.

The sun will go up and go down if we are here or not to be found. The sun dose not cares where we are bound.

I don’t know why but no matter how hard the sun tries the sun tells many lies and inside slowly it dies

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on Oct. 26 2012 at 12:21 pm
See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
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Its a metaphorical poem referring to the sun

on Oct. 26 2012 at 12:19 pm
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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meaningful and captured such irony. I love it.

on Oct. 26 2012 at 12:09 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Nice :) could you explain the poem, please...?


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