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Pessimistic Sun

By , Edenton, NC
The sun looks down at all the children having fun but sun cares for none. For the sun is a pessimistic one.

The sun may not have clothing but it has depression and anger to wear. To the sun nothings fair but the sun doesn’t care.

The sun will go up and go down if we are here or not to be found. The sun dose not cares where we are bound.

I don’t know why but no matter how hard the sun tries the sun tells many lies and inside slowly it dies





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brooklynbabe96 said...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 12:19 pm
meaningful and captured such irony. I love it.
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 12:09 pm
Nice :) could you explain the poem, please...?
 
See.As.Eye.See replied...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 12:21 pm
Its a metaphorical poem referring to the sun
 
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