what you do to my life

December 8, 2011
The wind blows by and with it so seems time everything changes.
Winter creeps on but with it comes your love,
How I wish I’d known I was seeing my forever.
My life was cold, broken, and lost,
But then you came along and lit up the path.
My broken heart you sewed together the cold of life,
You changed the weather now I smile,
I greet each day with a laugh as I sit and think about my forever.
You’ve changed my life you mended my broken wings,
As I soar high and think of you,
With a smile bright my eyes alive,
You bring laughter,
You bring joy.
I’m so glad I went out that cold night to a party,
I wanted not to attend because now I’ve met you and alas my life is alive again.

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MysticLady said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 9:47 pm
This is very nice. good job. :) see you around
jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 11:26 am
Great job! This is really meaningful; I'm impressed! P.S. I love how you incorporated the weather into this poem. It's beautiful. Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!
AlaskaGrown said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 10:15 pm
Mrow, you did really good on this piece. :)
savetheplanet said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 12:57 am
Did you finally find someone Michael?  I'm happy for you :D
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