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Life in our hands, getting better with time
i call out your name, and you echoe back mine.
This beauty so rare, it is seldom ever seen.
an eternal best friend on whom i will always lean.
your eyes are filled with reality, mine are clouded with dreams.
you take it for what it is, i search for what it means.
a love so breathtaking, it has to be forever.
two halves of a whole have no chance of failure.
though im a dreamer, i couldnt dream of better than this. you've always had my heart since that very first kiss.




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Emily said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 2:24 pm:
I really liked this poem! It's very sweet, and I think I understand the feeling behind it. I would just say that, although some poetry doesn't require capital letters, I prefer when they're used appropriately, and that some of the lines seemed too long or short to fit with the general scheme. Overall, though, this was a great poem!
 
jbjones87 replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 8:48 am :
Thanks Emily! I will remember that. I just submitted more work and its pending right now so when they publish it i would appreciate more feedback :)
 
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