This is for Her

December 12, 2011
By iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson


This is for Her
Do you love her?
More than the world?
What would you do for her?
Have you ever seen a girl like her before?
Or.....
Is she one of a kind?
Do you keep her in mind?
Or is she always out of sight
Out of mind?

Could you hold her tight
All night?
Would you fight her fights?
Would you treat her right?
Or better yet....
Could you be her knight?

Can you make her glow from her head to her toes just by kissing her goodnight?
Do you kiss her 'cuz you miss her or do you kiss her because she is you Miss?


The author's comments:
Just becasue I am a girl and I wrote this does not mean anything. This is what most girls want their realtionship to be lik.

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iheartz BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:54 am
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

lol, thanks :)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:57 am
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Its not only okay its great! and i think we all as writers have those kind of poems...sometimes i write some to and am like hmm...lol but its very good!

iheartz BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 9:17 am
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

haha, no problem. Thank you and I really, really appreciate the good feedback. Sometimes I suck at writing and Im glad to know this ones okay, :)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:37 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

This is a great poem! Yes every girl wants to be treated right and every girl/person should. Very good poem! let me know when others get posted!

iheartz BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:50 am
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

sure, no prob!!! and thanks for all comments. ::)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 2:50 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

It was a good poem you just need to change the structure a bit:) Could you please comment on my work?

iheartz BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:43 am
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

okay.......... did you like my poem? xoxo gothgirl

on Jan. 16 2012 at 8:51 pm
Branden Navedo SILVER, Oklahoma, Maryland
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Here's what I learned from writing poetry: Try to keep from writing sentences. for example: When April bends above me And finds me fast asleep Dust need not keep the secret A live heart died to keep See? Rather than complete sentences, here Sara Teasdale is using fragments in order to keep from creating some monotonous sentence.

on Jan. 12 2012 at 11:21 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

So true, it does seem like something eminem would rap xD i really liked this though, its exactly what i'd love out of a relationship

iheartz BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 8:37 am
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

lol i like eminem, so i guess thats good, so thx :)

on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:13 am
Cody_Goelz PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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2pac Amaru Shakur

life goes on
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this is a really good peice it sounds like somthing eminem would rap which is awesome keep up the good work

 



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