This is for Her

December 12, 2011
This is for Her
Do you love her?
More than the world?
What would you do for her?
Have you ever seen a girl like her before?
Is she one of a kind?
Do you keep her in mind?
Or is she always out of sight
Out of mind?

Could you hold her tight
All night?
Would you fight her fights?
Would you treat her right?
Or better yet....
Could you be her knight?

Can you make her glow from her head to her toes just by kissing her goodnight?
Do you kiss her 'cuz you miss her or do you kiss her because she is you Miss?

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scenesoccerqueen said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:37 pm
This is a great poem! Yes every girl wants to be treated right and every girl/person should. Very good poem! let me know when others get posted!
kk-gothgirl-kk replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 9:17 am
haha, no problem. Thank you and I really, really appreciate the good feedback. Sometimes I suck at writing and Im glad to know this ones okay, :)
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 10:57 am
Its not only okay its great! and i think we all as writers have those kind of poems...sometimes i write some to and am like but its very good!
kk-gothgirl-kk replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:54 am
lol, thanks :)
Supernova7 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 2:50 pm
It was a good poem you just need to change the structure a bit:) Could you please comment on my work?
kk-gothgirl-kk replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:50 am
sure, no prob!!! and thanks for all comments. ::)
Branden N. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 8:51 pm
Here's what I learned from writing poetry: Try to keep from writing sentences. for example: When April bends above me And finds me fast asleep Dust need not keep the secret A live heart died to keep See? Rather than complete sentences, here Sara Teasdale is using fragments in order to keep from creating some monotonous sentence.
kklovemeformekk replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 8:43 am
okay.......... did you like my poem? xoxo gothgirl
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 11:21 pm
So true, it does seem like something eminem would rap xD i really liked this though, its exactly what i'd love out of a relationship
Cody_Goelz said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 11:13 am

this is a really good peice it sounds like somthing eminem would rap which is awesome keep up the good work


kklovemeformekk replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 8:37 am
lol i like eminem, so i guess thats good, so thx :)
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