The Kill

December 11, 2011
The little girl dozes
In a field of stained roses
Silent and still
As if someone had already gotten to the kill





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BrandybuckTook said...
Jul. 14, 2013 at 4:43 pm
I've read most of your pieces and they're all very good. But this is the best one so far! It's so foreboding and yet calming to read. I loved your rhyme pattern as well. Keep it up and you'll be famous soon! (If not I'll make you famous;) I've MEMORIZED this piece.
 
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