Desperate Fellings

December 5, 2011
By Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."


Have you felt this before?
How I feel so desperate?
Do you know what it’s like?
To be surrounded
By those who hate you
Did you know so long ago?
That it would end that way
Did you see my love for you?
Did you know you killed my dreams?
I trusted you
As any girl does her daddy
But you broke it
You looked into my eyes
And told me those lies
Did you know I would figure it out?
Or do you still see me as that little girl?
You used to be my hero
But not anymore
I always thought that you loved me
But all you do is use me
I was still a babe
When you figured it out
That you could use me for your gain
It only took me 11 years
To figure out that you didn’t love us
I won’t let you hurt my siblings
My baby sister will not have to struggle for your love
My baby brother will not have to fight for your acceptance
They will not go though what I did
I may be a witch
But I will not subject them to that
But now I ask
Do you feel this now?
How desperate I am
To be rid of you?


The author's comments:
i wrote this not soon after i saw my dad again. and i felt the need to tell him how he messed our lives up.

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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 8:11 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Why do you think people would laugh at you? You are REALLY good. Don't let other people's opinions get in the way of what you are writing.

Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 12:11 am
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

thanks, i almost didnt put it on cause i thought itd get laughed at

on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:37 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

This particular one almost made me cry. Wow, bravo.


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