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The day limps on,
Laying waste to my dreams.

But you
Are a dream,
Dancing through the tempest,
Saving my life with every step.

How can I explain?
Would you understand?

The dancer heals all.
Boldly moving,
Catches me gently
As I drown.

I owe so much for your
Compassion,

Understanding,


Inspiration.

Life whirls me about in endless torment, endless pain.
But tonight, I smile at the darkness;
Smile and watch as the dancer glides by.





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705toofdaPThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 11:38 pm
This is beautiful Prom. My favorite part is the very last line. Keep it up!
 
TaurusGal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 25, 2012 at 12:06 pm
Wow.... I can't use words to describe this. It's just excellent. Wow, that's all I can say.
 
danceonwater said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 11:43 am
This is really good Loki. It does sound professional. Love the dancing! Keep writing!
 
Chocolatefrog said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 4:20 pm
i liked this it sounded quite professional, it could belong in a classical poetry book.
 
thefamoustapper said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 4:24 pm
I.am.speechless. I absolutley in love with the bittersweet meaning a depth of this peice! 
 
thefamoustapper said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 4:24 pm
I.am.speechless. I absolutley in love with the bittersweet meaning a depth of this peice! :)
 
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