Cleansing Rain

November 29, 2011
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Rain wipes away the sorrow and dread;
cleans off the blemishes from the face of the day;
Washes off all the fear and doubt like a kid licks his fingers clean;
time for a new beginning;
let the new day's light shine.





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CarrieAnn13 said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 7:33 pm
This is excellent!  My only criticism would be that you should consistently capitalize your words or put in periods when a 'sentence' ends.  Other than that, excellent work! :)
 
Sinc321 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 7:35 pm

thanks but i was kinda going for the run on, not a complete thought untill the end thing though. but ill keep that in mind =)

 

 
Noni3280 replied...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 8:30 pm
cool as, who doesnt love the rain!
 
Amery2014 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 8:37 pm
I think this is really good.  You should add on to it.  It will make it even better.  This is really inspiring too :)
 
Sinc321 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 3:57 pm
awsome, thanks =)
 
youngpilot said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 7:51 pm
There are so many songs relating to rain and it's healing powers, and this just sums that right up. Nice job!
 
Sinc321 replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 7:53 pm

haha well rain is the best kinda weather, i love summer rain storms! expectaly with my gf those are the best nights ever

 

 
ninja17 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 7:19 pm
I love it! I can somehow relate to it and it was deep :) 5 stars! 
 
Sinc321 replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 7:22 pm
thanks! =) i love the feed back
 
Musawwir21 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm

Umm . sweetie great strong beginning it would be even better if you completed it . I understand poems take a long time but time is a beautiful thing . Please finish it . I love where its going . <3

 

 
Sinc321 replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 5:48 pm
thanks so much for the feed back, i'll see what i can do =)
 
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