My Ideal Friend

November 26, 2011
By Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik


If you fall, don't worry I'll catch you
If you drop, I'll push you back up
When you need a hand, mines is there
When you need comfort, my shoulder's waiting
If you're lost, I'll be your North Star
If times get dark, I have spare light
When you get tangled in trouble, I'll help you out
When you make a mistake, you can borrow my tools to fix it
I'll catch anything that life throws at you
I'll be your friend through thick and thin


The author's comments:
I don't really have a best friend, so this is how I would picture a best friend.

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on Jan. 10 2012 at 8:31 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

I liked the North Star too, and this made me think about my own best friend =) i know hes always there for me. Great poem, and I know you'll find an amazing best friend soon if you haven't already

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:48 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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As everyone else seems to, I enjoyed the North Star reference. I liked it because, though some of your other comparisons were coloquial, it was a bit out of the box (Ha, see what I did there? I'm such a hypocrite).

As Chaotic pointed out, omit that "s" from "mines". Other than that, I can't find any spelling or grammatical mistakes. 

I enjoyed it, though it's a common topic. 4/5 because you got bonus points for getting interesting with them stars XD


Chrysaora GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:46 pm
Chrysaora GOLD, Providence Forge, Virginia
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This is a really good poem! I am glad I have a friend like this; this helps me appreciate friendship, especially for good friends

ChaoticBliss said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:02 pm
ChaoticBliss, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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What a nice poem! My favorite line is "If you're lost, I'll be your North Star" and "If times get dark, I have spare light"

Oh and for the third line, omit the 's' from 'mine'.

Overall, very nice poem. I like it!


on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:55 pm
kwoodman821 BRONZE, Old Fort, North Carolina
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Its nice to have friends like this! I like this poem, its has such a happy tone to it.  love the "north star" part =)  Its very good!


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