Barely Alive

November 24, 2011
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Invisible tears tear through my brain and rip a gaping entrance into my heart
Blue droplets of rain and a black hard pavement
Yellow lines and a sad face hidden behind smiling characters sent on a palm leech
Black and full of what keeps me alive
Red clouds of confusion, hurt, and angst from the clashing talons of two robins in the rose garden
Appearing vicious only in sounds but beautiful to the naked eye

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Inksplotch said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:14 pm
This is beautiful (: I love all the colors you used. The last line was amazing. Five stars! Also, I'd really appreciate it if you checked out some of my work. Thanks (:
poetface replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 10:35 pm
Thanks Sooo much, I joined here like almost a year ago and I haven't gotten a comment till now. :))) & I will check u out. Thnx again!!
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