Barely Alive

November 24, 2011
By poetface SILVER, Woodruff, South Carolina
poetface SILVER, Woodruff, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“Waste no more time arguing about what a good man should be. Be one.” Marcus Aurelius


Invisible tears tear through my brain and rip a gaping entrance into my heart
Blue droplets of rain and a black hard pavement
Yellow lines and a sad face hidden behind smiling characters sent on a palm leech
Black and full of what keeps me alive
Red clouds of confusion, hurt, and angst from the clashing talons of two robins in the rose garden
Appearing vicious only in sounds but beautiful to the naked eye



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on Dec. 4 2011 at 10:35 pm
poetface SILVER, Woodruff, South Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Waste no more time arguing about what a good man should be. Be one.” Marcus Aurelius

Thanks Sooo much, I joined here like almost a year ago and I haven't gotten a comment till now. :))) & I will check u out. Thnx again!!

Inksy SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 1:14 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

This is beautiful (: I love all the colors you used. The last line was amazing. Five stars! Also, I'd really appreciate it if you checked out some of my work. Thanks (:




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