I want to hear | Teen Ink

I want to hear

November 16, 2011
By samas PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
samas PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
24 articles 16 photos 6 comments

I want to hear
A heartbeat of a new born child
And of an old person
Just to hear
The different in beats
But the same sound
I wan to hear
Different languages
Filling a room
The sounds clashing
And meshing
Becoming one
As they speak
I want to hear
The shouts nada screams
Of the crowd
Cheering and booing away
Hoping to win
I want to hear
The music of the world
Coming from the mouths
Of young ones
From headphones
Plugged into the world
The cords
Wrapped around our hearts
And ears
I want to hear
The whispers in a room
Trying not to get caught
Hushed tones spilling secrets
Into the ears of the listener

I want to hear
Everything


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:07 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let what you can't do stop you from doing what you can do.
John Wooden
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
Eleanor Roosevelt

haha I don't know what there's a ? mark after great job oh well

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:07 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let what you can't do stop you from doing what you can do.
John Wooden
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
Eleanor Roosevelt

Cool ending! Way to tie in all your hopes into the ending by saying everything, but I like how you thoroughly described what everything was in a creative and insightful way. Great Job?

Care to comment on my work? Thanks and Write On!