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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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Let-Love-In PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 3:27 pm
I have no words. this is so beautiful and well written, the imagery is amazing and the flow is incredible. awesome job! definitely keep writing.
RoseCartier BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 2:53 pm
i like it alot! new favorite
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 12:24 pm
This is really good and I want to get to this level, can someone judge some of my poetry and tell me something I need to work on.
ryanryanryan BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:40 pm
This was exremely well written and had great imagery.
ThinkGeek72 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:40 pm
Very interesting and different! I loved it!
ImCoolerThanYou said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:33 pm
Very very well written. Great imagery and good details. You can see it in your mind.
ryanryanryan BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:30 pm
very well written, has good imagery, amazing flow
tdotcooley SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:39 am
Very well written and relates to many important realizations in life.
GingerLily BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:30 am
So amazing! This can relate to a lot of different situations, you've written it so well that people can view it in their own ways.
Blacknblue_kissez BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:06 pm
This poem is filled with imagery, it's so vivid and beautiful. I can see a warm summers day, and a boy trying to prove his father wrong. I love this.
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 4:18 am
Great poem i wish i could be as good as you are and congrats on the mag i hope you keep writing!
drew said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 10:59 am
+1 The message of the poem is really unclear....the resolution is the father binding you again? Just...weird =P
Labyrinth said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 2:36 pm
It is very good. And where do you get off saying it's "DREADFUL"??? I think you have no eye for poetry. V_V
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