Falling to Fast

November 21, 2011
I didn't want to love you
I didn't want to look at you and feel that way
But for some reason
I did

Your blue eyes had just the right
amount of sparkle
Your laugh had just the right
amount of twinkle
Your voice just the right
amount of hope

Why couldn't I love you so?
Why couldn't I see that you were bad?
Why couldn't I tell that you didn't care about me?

I was just falling to fast.





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aleksus said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:35 am
That poem describes how a lot of people have been through that type of relationship. Very Good!
 
tweetiebruce said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 1:05 am

Hi there, great stuff but some things to help....

'Why couldn't i love you so?' 

It might be my mistake but i though you did love...?

the second stanza was my favourite :D

 
TheInvisibleGirl replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 8:25 pm
Yeah, it was a little oops!  Thanks so much.  
 
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