Falling to Fast

November 21, 2011
By TheInvisibleGirl BRONZE, Dexter, Michigan
TheInvisibleGirl BRONZE, Dexter, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
The price we pay for love is loss
-Next to Normal


I didn't want to love you
I didn't want to look at you and feel that way
But for some reason
I did

Your blue eyes had just the right
amount of sparkle
Your laugh had just the right
amount of twinkle
Your voice just the right
amount of hope

Why couldn't I love you so?
Why couldn't I see that you were bad?
Why couldn't I tell that you didn't care about me?

I was just falling to fast.



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aleksus SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:35 am
aleksus SILVER, Holcomb, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
People are so caught up by the fickleness of today, they forget the reality of tomorrow-Me

That poem describes how a lot of people have been through that type of relationship. Very Good!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:25 pm
TheInvisibleGirl BRONZE, Dexter, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The price we pay for love is loss
-Next to Normal

Yeah, it was a little oops!  Thanks so much.  

on Nov. 28 2011 at 1:05 am
tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like music - You can make mistakes so you try again. But when the piece can't be helped you try again another time.

Hi there, great stuff but some things to help....

'Why couldn't i love you so?' 

It might be my mistake but i though you did love...?

the second stanza was my favourite :D





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