Loneliness

November 21, 2011
By AmandaaPandaa GOLD, Glen Cove, New York
AmandaaPandaa GOLD, Glen Cove, New York
15 articles 9 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"what lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us"!!


Loneliness
Results in unhappiness
The air around me is closing in
The air is leaving
Death is speaking
I don’t move I just sit and wait
All I can do is hate
Never thought that this day would come
So now I guess I have to run
I run till there’s no more sun
Secrets unfold
I’ll never be able to let them go
I can hear my heart beat slowing down
It’s an unusual sound
What if I stay will I be okay?
Life is floating away
Like a single balloon drifting away
I’m left alone as if it’s any other day like today
I’m lost and alone
I feel as if I would be thrown across the room
I wish I can sweep away the loss and pain
I unfortunately never had gain
There are doors to the right
Doors to the left
I just stand there waiting for the right door to open
Maybe a few more years till I’m free from
This lonely slavery
Loneliness
Results in unhappiness


The author's comments:
this is the side of me people rarely see

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on Dec. 21 2011 at 12:08 pm
AmandaaPandaa GOLD, Glen Cove, New York
15 articles 9 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"what lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us"!!

thank you so much!

on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:34 am
Cody_Goelz PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Only God Can Judge Me
2pac Amaru Shakur

life goes on
2pac Amaru Shakur

this is a great peice i like it alot you are a good writer i have been reading your stuff for about 15 minutes excellent work.

on Dec. 14 2011 at 12:17 pm
AmandaaPandaa GOLD, Glen Cove, New York
15 articles 9 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"what lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us"!!

thanks alot it means alot i think my favorate would be the few lines where death was speaking! :)

on Dec. 14 2011 at 11:39 am
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

Hey I like the poem a lot, i was trying to pick out my favorite lines, but there is too many of them, but really gud job. Keep it up!


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