Sitting

November 15, 2011
By Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
18 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
The silence isn't so bad
'Till I look at my hands and feel sad
'Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly.....


I sit on the wet walkway
Starring at the ducks
I know it's wet and raining
Maybe I will feel the coldness
Maybe I will feel something....

He sits down too, trying to comfort me
Silence.........Five feet apart
I think about so many things
We stay like this

One, Two, Three minutes
After the Sixth, he gets up

It rains harder

I hear rustling
I look.....and see him climbing a tree

Ten, Eleven, Twelve minutes
They arrive
Are concerned, but leave

I bike
Pain, Cold, Wet, Crying
Bawling

I come to the house
Terror takes over
An anxiety attack
I Force Myself To Ring The Doorbell

They let me in
My shoes are off
I am safe in this face of warmth and confusion


The author's comments:
I had had one of the worst fights with my dad and I was seriously depressed. My friends came, but I felt like they didn't care. I mean, I was completely drenched and sitting on wet pavement. But they love me.....

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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:39 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Of course you're a VIP. Very Insane Person. :) Jk; and cannot wait for pictures/more writing.

Erin326 GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 11:29 pm
Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
18 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
The silence isn't so bad
'Till I look at my hands and feel sad
'Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly.....

Oh, I am now a VIP!!! ;)

Erin326 GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 11:27 pm
Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
18 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
The silence isn't so bad
'Till I look at my hands and feel sad
'Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly.....

Thank you so much! I have quite a bit more on the way and lots of photos. Have a happy thanksgiving too!!

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:01 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Oh; and we totally do love you. :) Just sayin.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:00 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

You posted something! It's a miracle! :) As I said originally, I absolutely love it. No joke. Happy Thanksgiving.


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