World Full of Fakes

November 14, 2011
By Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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In this world full of fakes,
its so hard to be real,
and I'm just tryin' to be myself.
Is it too much for me to take on,
should I just back up and,
become one of you?
I feel like my life would be easier,
if I was one of you,
if I looked liked you,
if I talked like you,
or at least tried to.
In this world full of fakes,
its so hard to be real,
and I'm just tryin' to be myself.
I have already lost everyone I used to know,
everyone I used to love,
everyone I used to be,
to the world of the fakes,
and I feel like I'm all alone.
All alone,
in this world full of fakes,
oh! Why can't it be real!
Would be easier to just become one of you?
Follow down the footsteps of people past..
In this world full of fakes,
its so hard to be real,
and I'm just tryin' to be myself.



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pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:59 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

so amazing. i can relate to this! you are a terrific writer!

on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:58 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May)

This is what I think : EXACTLY!!!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:16 pm
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes SILVER, Sunnyvale, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together."

Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another,
"What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C. S. Lewis

WONDER BREAD!!! I AM HERE TO MAKE YOUR DAY!!! ;D

 

I love how REAL this poem is! Strangely, I can relate to this! I'm surrounded by so many fakes these days, while I'm trying to keep it REAL! XD 5/5!!!


on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:42 pm
-hannah- SILVER, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The books that help you most are those which make you think that most. The hardest way of learning is that of easy reading; but a great book that comes from a great thinker is a ship of thought, deep freighted with truth and beauty."

This is amazing, I can relate to it and im sure im not the only one, keep up the good work. :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:53 am
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I can see where you are coming from on this one. It was very well done. 

 


on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:15 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

ive commented 3 freaking times o n this amazing poem and my comments dont show up!!!! :(

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:28 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

AMAZING WORK WONDERWOMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can completely relate to that and you've portrayed it immaculately!!! It's unbelievably expressive and emotional!! Certain 5/5 no doubt whatsoever!!!!!!!!!! x x x x x Luv you hun!!!! <3<3<3<3


on Nov. 24 2011 at 5:49 pm
MotivatedInk GOLD, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some people dream of success...while others wake up and work at it!

This is the truth of our world today. Very nice.

on Nov. 24 2011 at 5:16 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

wow this is really good !!!

on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:20 am
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Very relatable, loved it! Nice job!


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