Death of That Love

November 15, 2011
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The flowers sent hangs in the air
The mother cries
She comes down the alter
In her gown of white

He does not wait for her when she reaches the end
And the guest are dressed all in black
The tears are not those of happiness

The song plays the same
The flowers smell the same
The tears have not changed

He does not wait for her
And that is what kills her

The funeral of her heart proceeds

How close it was to a happily ever after
If only he had awaited her
And he made all the difference

In the death of that love





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ReneeB said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 10:58 pm
That's sad, but nice. It reminded me of the song "Just a Dream" by Carrie Underwood.
It's just my opinion that you shouldn't blatantly say that it's a funeral; the reader can infer that much, so i don't think you need that line about the funeral of her heart - maybe the "procession of my heart" or something? Just a thought :)
 
ElleAhre replied...
Jun. 26, 2012 at 1:40 pm
thanks for the suggestion i appreciete it, and thanks for checking out my work
 
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