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I Really Miss you

We were so close,
You believed in me,
That’s what I miss the most,
You had my heart and the key.

You were so special,
So talented and cute,
I had never known anyone like you,
Thanks to you, I know love can be true.

That day you took me to the park,
Was the best night of my life,
Even though I’m scared of the dark,
With you I always felt safe.

You drew me a wonderful picture,
A beautiful scene,
That image took my breath away,
I couldn’t believe it, the image was me.

I loved you more than I can say,
I miss you even more,
It broke my heart when you went away,
You left me wanting more.

You still have my heart,
I trust you not to break it,
I’ll be waiting for our next trip to the park,
I’ll even wait for you in the dark,
So you can make more of your beautiful art.

I really miss you…




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LouieHanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 4:58 pm:
This is really deep!
 
TaylorBreanneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:23 pm :
Thank you!
 
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samiasaskia24 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
So simple and filled with sweet memory.
 
TaylorBreanneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:02 pm :
Thank you! :)
 
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LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:44 pm:
I love it! My favorite lines are "That image took my breath away,/ I couldn't believe it, the image was me." and the ending was simple, but wonderful. Great work!
 
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ReadWriteBreatheThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 2:20 pm:
Aw this is so sweet but sad. I really like the imagry and descriptions. I love how the last stanza rhymes all the way through then you say "I really miss you" Great job.
 
TaylorBreanneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 2:32 pm :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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