I Really Miss you

November 3, 2011
We were so close,
You believed in me,
That’s what I miss the most,
You had my heart and the key.

You were so special,
So talented and cute,
I had never known anyone like you,
Thanks to you, I know love can be true.

That day you took me to the park,
Was the best night of my life,
Even though I’m scared of the dark,
With you I always felt safe.

You drew me a wonderful picture,
A beautiful scene,
That image took my breath away,
I couldn’t believe it, the image was me.

I loved you more than I can say,
I miss you even more,
It broke my heart when you went away,
You left me wanting more.

You still have my heart,
I trust you not to break it,
I’ll be waiting for our next trip to the park,
I’ll even wait for you in the dark,
So you can make more of your beautiful art.

I really miss you…

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LouieHan said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 4:58 pm
This is really deep!
TaylorBreanne replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:23 pm
Thank you!
samiasaskia24 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:55 pm
So simple and filled with sweet memory.
TaylorBreanne replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:02 pm
Thank you! :)
LoudDreamer said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:44 pm
I love it! My favorite lines are "That image took my breath away,/ I couldn't believe it, the image was me." and the ending was simple, but wonderful. Great work!
ReadWriteBreathe said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 2:20 pm
Aw this is so sweet but sad. I really like the imagry and descriptions. I love how the last stanza rhymes all the way through then you say "I really miss you" Great job.
TaylorBreanne replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 2:32 pm
Thank you so much! :)
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