Staring at those beautiful stars

November 1, 2011
By Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!


Staring at those beautiful stars closer to the heaven,
I dream of you with my eyes open.

The moon like a ball of snow,
appears so dull when compared to 'your glow'.

With every lonely moment becoming darker and colder,
I wish you were here with your head on my shoulder.

As dawn sets in and as stars become few,
I swear darling that i will always love you...



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Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 12:48 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

Thanks a lot :)

on Jan. 5 2012 at 12:26 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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cute!! I really like this

Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:33 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

Thank You :) Sure

Fizza SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 8:23 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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really sweet n beautiful poem. 5/5 stars! :) wud u mind to check out some of my work?

Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:25 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

thank you..i do love that line as well :)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:23 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

so sweet! i love the second line "i dream of you with eyes open".

Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:55 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

Thanks a ton (:

on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:53 pm
BellaChance PLATINUM, Steinenbronn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Even the smallest person can chance the course of the future. -J.R.R. Tolkien

really good!! (: super cute

Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:47 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

Thank You :) They say u can never understand a girl..that certainly applies for men as well!!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:44 pm
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Be kind. You never know whose fighting for their life.

Made me cry. Guys can be so romantic :')

Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 8:06 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

thank u :)

on Dec. 24 2011 at 8:05 am
Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings
when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

Very pretty i like it

Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:51 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

thank u :)

on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:50 am
SiaHilion BRONZE, Jaipur, Other
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Favorite Quote:
you can hate me you can love me but u can not ignore me..

last line is breath taking yaaaar....

Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:27 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

thank you :)

Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:26 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

thank you
ya definitely :)

on Dec. 15 2011 at 2:15 pm
OneDirectionInfection, Parsippany, New Jersey
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WOW...!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:56 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

awwwwwwwww!!! :)

 

...please check out, rate, and comment on my work too. THanks! I appreciate it! :)


Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:30 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you believe is what you become!!

Thank you :)

Arpit said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:27 am
Seriously amazing dear..!! Keep it up man..!!


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