Cinders & Seizures

October 31, 2011
By JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant


Epilepsy in my brain,
feels like the blood in my veins.
Then the scorching phoenix rises,
can you feel the repeated demises.
Cause all types of beauty are flawed,
I often em-path the false clause.
The embers can't be lit,
the ashes remain and sit.
No one can get up,
has the stillness, simply been enough>
I had grand mal and pedimol,
so why is a normal person stalled?
Your that plain bonfire,
stuck cause your a liar.
So tell me, would you die,
if you were paralyzed.
So be the doll with a hidden face,
glued to a chair and smile fully laced.
Cause Mom & Dad,
are getting sad.
Cause the kids can't do what they never had.
Cause Cinders & Seizures was all I had, So look at me now, and look were I am.


The author's comments:
I had epilepsy as a baby, and had a relapse on September 10. It was grand maul, my father told me. Cinders are those people who are never moving forward, then I combined it with seizures.

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on Nov. 14 2011 at 4:11 pm
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

& should not be there either... I'm certain I did not write that...

on Nov. 14 2011 at 4:10 pm
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

> really should be a question mark, I thought I had done it correctly.




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