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So many have tried to discover
So many have tried to explain
So many have tried and not succeeded
The power of the dancing rain

The drops of crystals
Floating from the sky
No one can discover
It can't be simplified

The terrific power of beauty
The amazing power of nature
Falling from the sky
Like its own little creature

Dancing on the air
The crystals dance among us
Falling gently, falling slowly
They have a power over us

It has a calming effect, the rain
It seems to mystify
No one can understand
But everyone asks why

Its magical, Its mystical
Simply its just amazing
The power, the beauty
Of when it is raining





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Ella1 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:19 pm
Great poem, I like your take on the rain!
 
julywinters1226 said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 11:27 pm
awesome poem.:)
 
Lexie96 said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 5:42 pm
This poem 'simply its just amazing'. Check out my work sometime, please, and congrats on getting an editor's choice!
 
TheWhiteFlower said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 5:07 pm

this poem is so true!

good job.

 
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